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1.第二句有错,应为:They had the smell that i dislike.如果像你的那样翻译是汉语式的翻译.不过定语从句你还没学,记住就行了.that i dislike作为smell的修饰词应放在其后.
2.第三句有错,应为:And i only did a lot of homework and played computer games.
因为did为实义动词,作谓语用,was是一个系动词,后接形容词和名词作表语.play后加ed,注意时态.
3.I had an hour for relaxing,不是relaxed.
4. Later, I continued to study.注意你的表达,别人可能不懂你的意思.
5.I didn't like it today.like是及物动词,后应接上名词或名词性的短语作宾语.你是想说我不喜欢今天,对吧?
5.I hope i have a good luck tomorrow. 去掉in.tomorrow表时间,可直接作时间状语.我想这个表达会更好:
I hope i am lucky tomorrow.

1 I and my mother
2 我看不懂 the had an i dislike sell你是不是想说,那里 有一种我不喜欢闻的味道 我觉得应该这么说There had something which I dislike smelling
3 I only did a lot of homework and then palyed computer games
4 I had one hour for relaxing,one hour for sleeping
5 " later ,I was study" 你是不是想说,后来我又开始学习了,我觉得应该" After that ,I was always studying
6 去掉in
这只是我个人的改法,仅仅从语法方面,如果还有什么不清楚的地方,通过百度给我留言

Today,I with my mother went to the hospital.It was boring.There was a smell that I dislike.I only did a lot of homework and played computer games.
In the afternoon,I spent an hour to relax myself and an hour to sleep.Later,I went on studying.
I don't like today.I hope I can have a good luck tomorrow!

参考修改：
Today I went to the hospital with my mother.It was boring.(The had an I dislike smell)[你想表达什么？].I did nothing but doing a lot of homework and playing some computer games.
In the afternoon,I had an hour for relaxation,and an hour for sleeping.Later,I studyed. I didn't like today.I hope I will have good luck tomorrow!
对于初学者一定要注意动词的时态、常用的英语表达习惯，切不可机械地翻译！

没错什么，不必修改．