梦幻西游适合单开的区:用过去式叙述

My mother made a cake for my birthday. My friends and I sang songs and danced very happily. Then we went to my grandma's home by air in Beijing.We stayed there for one day,and went back home at evening.My family watched TV together. The programs are very interesting.

My mother made me a birthday cake. my friends and I sang and danced together and we all had a good time. Then my whole family flied to my grandma's home in beijing and we enjoyed the time there. Finally we back home at night, and watched TV together. The programs on TV that night was very fascinating.

My mom made a cake for my birthday party.On the party,my friends and I sang and danced together,and we all had a lot of fun.Then we flew to Beijing,where my grandmother is living.We played all day long there.In the evening,we got back home,and later my whole family were watching TV.These programmes are so interesting.