梦幻西游2017盘丝大改:请高手帮忙把汉语翻译成英语救急

The novelist Lao She, with its distinct personality and is very creative unique artistic style, rich repositories of Chinese literature. By the "Luo Tuo Xiangzi" marked his first creative peak. Real and vivid picture of a Peking human wagoner tragic destiny. The novelist Lao She in his community, to reality, to life observation and profound understanding on leading character in the heart of the world and in-depth reveal psychological and rich portrayal, honest, eager to excel, decent, selfish Xiangzi many psychological activities in the author's anecdotal and personnel acquired full expression. Xiangzi shape the image of success is one of the important factors.
不知道对不对

创作个性creative personality
创作高峰creative peak
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以上都是文不对题，理解的偏差很大。

主人公personae ：用dramatis personae（剧中人,小说,诗歌,电影等中的主人公,人物）说得过去，单独用只能用单数，其意思是是： 第一人称，人物表，人物形象。

misery fate：这儿那能用名词misery？

vividly：重复显得累赘

stressed on ；有这个短语吗？stress成了不及物动词！

profoundly discovery：副词修饰名词！

the inner mind：还有outer mind不成？

the delicate and prosperous：这两个词用得很缺乏水平，如果能认识到这点的话，能力还有提升的空间。

based on：用得也不得体。

the lives：复数是什么意思？很清楚吧。

graceful：原文用词存在一点问题，但graceful是永远不能用在这的。

depiction：这个词重复使用次数太多（其动词depict也算在内）

responsible：用来那么多生僻而正规的词汇突然来一个日常词汇，极不协调。

the successful figure of Xiangzi imagine.：这句话问题应该有个动词化的名词也许还可凑合过去。

imagine是个名词吗？

mental depiction自己知道是什么意思吗？

整体的理解、表达还存在诸多问题。

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king2014 - 助理 三级的翻译显示了其扎实的语言功底和语言转换能力，有点遗憾的是有几处小的遗漏，比如“代表作”“主人公”等等。

Summary:Old give up with its fresh and clear creations character with very special art style, enrich the Chinese literature treasure-house.The representative make 《 the camel 祥 son 》 symbolize his the first creations high peak.True, described pathetic destiny of a manpower carter of Beiping vividly.Old give up with him to the society, to the actuality, to the observation and deep understandings of the life, put forth effort goes deep in to announce to public in the male heart world of host and meticulous abundant of mental state describe, make honesty, want that that many mental activities of the strong, honourable and selfish son of 祥 acquired the full body in author spread say moderate copy 摹 now.It is one of the important factors that the image of the son of 祥 molds to achieve success.

Keyword:Old give up 《 the camel 祥 son 》 the mental state describes the 祥 sub- image

Summary:Old give up with its fresh and clear creations character with very special art style, enrich the Chinese literature treasure-house.The representative make 《 the camel 祥 son 》 symbolize his the first creations high peak.True, described pathetic destiny of a manpower carter of Beiping vividly.Old give up with him to the society, to the actuality, to the observation and deep understandings of the life, put forth effort goes deep in to announce to public in the male heart world of host and meticulous abundant of mental state describe, make honesty, want that that many mental activities of the strong, honourable and selfish son of 祥 acquired the full body in author spread say moderate copy 摹 now.It is one of the important factors that the image of the son of 祥 molds to achieve success.

Keyword:Old give up 《 the camel 祥 son 》 the mental state describes the 祥 sub- image

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The novelist Lao She, with its distinct personality and is very creative unique artistic style, rich repositories of Chinese literature. By the "Luo Tuo Xiangzi" marked his first creative peak. Real and vivid picture of a Peking human wagoner tragic destiny. The novelist Lao She in his community, to reality, to life observation and profound understanding on leading character in the heart of the world and in-depth reveal psychological and rich portrayal, honest, eager to excel, decent, selfish Xiangzi many psychological activities in the author's anecdotal and personnel acquired full expression. Xiangzi shape the image of success is one of the important factors.

Summary:I am old to give up to enrich a Chinese literature treasure-house with very special art style with its fresh and clear creations character.Representative work 《camel 祥 son 》symbolize the first of his creations high peak.True, described the carter's pathetic destiny of a Beiping manpower vividly.Old give up with him to the society, to the reality, to observation and deep understanding of life, put forth effort male heart world in the host of thorough announce to public to enrich with delicacy of mental state describe, make honesty, want many mental activities of strong, honourable and selfish 祥 son in the author spread say moderate copy the 摹 acquired a full body now.It is one of the important factors that the image of 祥 son molds to achieve success.

Keyword:Old give up 《camel 祥 son 》 the mental state describe 祥 sub- image