现实中沙鹰的威力:哭求高人翻译一下!!!(汉译英)

Management Information System ,an important symbol of electronic,automated, modern management,is the basis of enterprise informationization and important step of informationization.The information technology can make for the enterprises in innovation,nowadays,enterprises are facing greater, more open and more intense market competition under the circumstance of the global economic integration and big development of the international trade.System is required to support effective information for managers' decision-making under the Insurance Companies real operations.And also provide to the largest facilities for the management and the fastest corresponding mechanism for the clients.Ultimately it will achieve rapid and efficient scripless office, and increase their core competitiveness.
The system is currently written by JSP language which is more popular and based on Java in order to facilitate the information store and query.And the system combines database management techniques.On the basis of the understand of the business processes of insurance companies,the system followed the insurance companies' real operations(现实业务翻成这个OK吗?还是用business) to achieve systems management function.
According to the technology of system exploitation and the development of software tools,you can choose lifecycle law to analyse and design the system. Friendly interface, easy operation, fast user feedback,and other functions are required of the system.
The system can carry out the basic management of business processes of Life insurance company(人寿保险是这个英文吗?我不知道)and a really scripless office.the principal functions of the system modules include six management modules :"New" ,"Input" ,"Charge", "Orders", "Query" ,"Danger".(将六个模块的名字简写了,不知道合不合适?)The main principle is consistent with needs of insurance companies real business when the system is developing.In terms of system ,stability, pertinence and advantage is also needed.The computer can automatically completed, some repetitive simple operations to reduce manual burden.Because insurance companies' business need high security and protection, so the system has a strict user certification and purview management.
Keyword : insurance, information systems, insurance processing

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Abstract
The management information system construction is manages delivery , automated, the modernized important symbol, is the enterprise becoming an information based society foundation, is the becoming an information based society construction important step. The information technology can the very good impetus enterprise progress innovation, at present, facing the whole world economic integration, the internationalization commercial trade big development, the enterprise face in a big way, is being more open, the more intense market competition. The system goal is according to the insurance company realistic service need, gives the effective information support for superintendent's decision-making; The management provides the biggest convenience. Provides the quickest corresponding mechanism for the customer. Finally realizes the fast highly effective scripless work, the increase enterprise's core competitive ability.
This system uses at present quite to be popular carries on the compilation based on the JAVA JSP language, for convenience information memory and inquiry, system union data bank administration technology. In to the insurance company service flow understanding foundation in, follows the insurance company the actual service realization system administration function. According to the system development technology and the software tool development, chooses with the life cycle law carries on the analysis and the design to the system. The system request has the friendly man-machine interactive contact surface, more convenient easy to understand operation flow, function and so on quick user feedback.
The system realization insurance company life insurance basic service flow management, can realize in the true significance scripless work, the system main function module includes "the new list management", "deals with the input", "the charge management", "the order form management", "the inquiry statistics management", "the danger plants the management" six functions sub- modules. When development the main principle conforms to the insurance company realistic service need. And causes the system to have the stability, pointed, the convenience. Some duplicated very high simple services, can automatically complete by the computer, lighten the artificial burden. Because insurance company service itself needs the high safekeeping of security, therefore the system has realized the strict user confirmation and the jurisdiction management.

Key word: Insurance, information system, insurance policy processing

英文翻译,可以参看上面二位的吧.
但作为摘要，你的字数太多了，都500多字了，一般二三百字就足够了。
摘要应简明，它的详简程度取决于文献的内容。通常中文摘要以不超过400字为宜，纯指示性摘要可以简短一些，应控制在200字上下（GB6447-86规定：报道性摘要和报道/指示性摘要一般以400字为宜；指示性摘要一般以200字左右为宜。GB7713-87规定：中文摘要一般不宜超过200~300字；外文摘要不宜超过250个实词。如遇特殊需要字数可以略多）。

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