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随着生活水平的提高,节假日出门旅游已经成为相当一部分人的时尚休闲方式。

As the improving of the standard of living, tourism in the holidays has become a fashion pastime of parts of persons.

//有错误改一下,呵呵
enhancing比improving真的好点.
部分人用partial也蛮好的.

With the improvement of the life standard, holiday tourism has become a fashional pastime for partial people.

As the enhancing of the living standard , tourism in the holidays has become a fashion pastime of some people.

With the improvement of the life standard, holiday tourism has become a fashional pastime for quite a lot of people.