杭州交通信息网力士乐液压阀中位机能:请问有什么语病吗? →it can let us know ...........
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it can let us know many many news and a lot of knowladges out of school,and it can communicate with people conveniently.
这是关于上网的好处..请问有什么语病吗?
这是关于上网的好处..请问有什么语病吗?
1、一句话中首字母要大写。
2、news是不可数名词，不能用many修饰，应该用much。
3、应该是“knowledge”。knowledge是不可数名词，不能加“s”。
4、“课外的”可以说“outside class”，但不能说out of school。
5、逗号和“and”之间应有空格。
6、从语意上看，后半句应该是and it can let us communicate with people conveniently.
所以给你一个范句：It can let us know much, much news and a lot of knowledge outside class, and it can let us communicate with people conveniently.
第一句去掉一个MANY
knowledge应该是这样拼写的
最后改成and it can help us communicate with people conveniently.
many many news --- a large number of news
knowledges--knowledge
it can communicate with people conveniently.
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it can make us communicate with others conveniently.
news 用 a lot of 修饰吧 保险。
knowladge不可数
荒唐！！！！
know ... knowledge是英语吗？？？？？？？？？？？？？？？？？？？
全是错的！
懒得说了，除非提问着邀请。