杭州交通信息网电商平台开发方案:看看有语病吗？
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Do you like summer holiday?I know nearly of children's answer is :"yes,I do.I love summer holiday,so I look forward come to soon every year.
帮忙检查一下，并改正，谢谢。
帮忙检查一下，并改正，谢谢。
nearly---most
come to---to coming
因为 look forward to doing sth.
nearly---most
of--去掉
answer is--answers are
look forward come to---look forward to it comes
soon--early
或者
nearly of children's--every child's
look forward come to---look forward to it comes
soon--early
summer holiday作为名次不可以单独出现，必须变为复数，或者加the.
nearly做为副词不可以与of搭配，必须变为nearly all of the children.
还有“所有孩子的回答”应为复数nearly all the children's answers are.
还有最后一句I look forward to it's coming every year.look forard to后应加名词或者动名词doing
I know (that) nearly all children's answer is :"yes,I do.I love summer holiday,so I look forward to it coming soon every year.
Do you like summer holiday?I know most of children's answer is :"yes,I do.I love summer holiday,so I look forward to coming soon every year.