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The happiest day
Last week I was very happy because I did lots of deeds.
This morning, I took a bus home. I found a seat on the bus. When we were stopping at a stop, an old lady got on the bus. She walked slowly. When she walked by my side, I thought about what do I have to do? Must I offer my seat to the old lady? I was thinking a long time. In the end, I offered my seat to the old lady, I was very happy. The old lady thanked me, and she said “You are a really good teenager”. That makes me very happy.
This is my happiest day of the winter vacation.

因它会死亡!
即使是勇气之母的总合力量
都不足以使我有权利吃饱。
原来是一块石头
没找到它们是件好事。
你就是不然不要离去哈哈

最愉快的一天
我上星期非常愉快因为我做了许多好事。
今晨, 我采取了公共汽车家。 我发现了一个位子在公共汽车。 当我们停着在中止, 一个老夫人上公共汽车。 她慢慢地走了。 当她走了由我的边, 我考虑什么我必须做? 我必须为老夫人提供我的位子吗? 我认为久时光。 最后, 我为老夫人提供了我的位子, 我非常愉快。 老夫人感谢了我, 并且她说"您是一个真正地好少年" 。 那牌子我非常愉快。
这是冬天假期的我最愉快的以天。

The happiest day
Last week I was very happy because I have did lots of deeds.
This morning, I went home by bus. I found a s eat on the bus. When we were stopping at a stop, an old lady got on the bus. She walked slowly. When she walked by my side, I thought about what do I have to do? Must I offer my seat to the old lady? I thought it for a long time. At the end, I offered my seat to the old lady, I was very happy. The old lady thanked me, and she said “You are really a good teenager”. That makes me very happy.
This is my happiest day of the winter vacation.

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