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This text introduces the development course of advertisement of the network briefly at first, introduce propagating the form and characteristic mainly of advertisement of the network further; Analyse the current situation of advertisement of the network , problem that development faces at present of the network advertisement especially, and the network advertisement is as the social development in science and technology, development trend of the economic prosperity.

In the artical, first it will simplely introduce the development of the internet commercials,then at the further step it will introduce the main
styles of delivering commercials and its
characteristics; it will emphasis on analyzing
the present situation of the internet
commercials, and the problems for developping
the internet commercials at this moment, and the tendency of internet commercials developping as
the new technology and the economy develop.

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The passage gave a brief introduction about the impoving progress of the network AD,then introduced its main spreading style and its features. focusing on analyzing its formal condition,the problems its now facing and its impoving trend on the condition of the impovement of the society tech and the prosperous of the economy