长虹电视安装电话:四级作文

这是一篇四级预测作文,有一个重要的问题，我发现好多的四级范文都不是按照这个思路写的它们都是把三个提示扩展个成一段就完了，可我上过一个新东方写作基础班，在那课上教的是这么写，我担心我这麽写会不会被认为是文不对路呀，就是觉得这是不是对付高级考试的呀？我现在真的很关心这个问题，因为我打算就在四级考试中就这麽写，成吗？
Cheating on tests
1作弊现象很普遍
2有很多原因
3学校应该采取措施杜绝作弊之风
The underlying trend of cheating on test among college students is much clearer. Despite of terrible punishment, they are still willing take the adventure for multiple reasons listed below.
College students, sometimes, always so busy that(change the o) no time left for them to review for those who devotes most of their time on studying, they are likely spend more their time on other subjects. Inevitably, the one they neglect become their weakness. As to the students who play all day, it, at least is a effective way to pass the examination in their mind. In addition, reliance are born in some students mind after successfully cheating several times. If the above two reasons are both fail to gain you belief ,then even a couple od excellent students who affected by the noise circumstance sell out themselves and, finally, have to cheat.
To sum up ,with this trend continuing, inevitably, schools will suffer disorder College shoule put their rule into force and tell the significance of frank to their students.
这篇文章的思路是我按照我上的一个新概念写作基础班老师教的写出的，但我也发现一个严重的问题，我看了几篇四级范文，他们的思路都是按照中文提示的几句话按顺序展开和我得思路有些不同，我想问，我这样写会不会被认为是不符合逻辑而不被判卷人认可？