杭州交通信息网心脏两尖瓣什么意思:语法好的进
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我是一名英语初学者,在暑假写了几篇短文,请英语好的朋友帮忙看一下,是否有错误,谢谢
When Miss Qiu left
After the final exam.Miss Zhao told us a surprising news.Our English teacher Miss Qiu will leave in next term.She will go to Australia to be a student again.
Every one felt so sad.Many of us cried very hard including some boys.
At that night,we wrote our thanks and wishes on the papers.The gave them to our nice teacher.We wished she will be better and better and happy every day.
At the beginning of the summer vacation.Miss Qiu wrote her feeling in her blog.She said she also feel so sorry.She will miss us every time.
In these two years,Miss Qiu teached us so many knowledge.And also be our friend.If we had any problem,we usually would told her and let she help us.
Even though Miss Qui has left us.But I think we will never forget her and we will word hard and hard.
When Miss Qiu left
After the final exam.Miss Zhao told us a surprising news.Our English teacher Miss Qiu will leave in next term.She will go to Australia to be a student again.
Every one felt so sad.Many of us cried very hard including some boys.
At that night,we wrote our thanks and wishes on the papers.The gave them to our nice teacher.We wished she will be better and better and happy every day.
At the beginning of the summer vacation.Miss Qiu wrote her feeling in her blog.She said she also feel so sorry.She will miss us every time.
In these two years,Miss Qiu teached us so many knowledge.And also be our friend.If we had any problem,we usually would told her and let she help us.
Even though Miss Qui has left us.But I think we will never forget her and we will word hard and hard.
final exam->final exams,考试一般不是一科,所以一般用复数
will leave ->would leave
will go ->would go文章整体时态是过去时,所以用would
The gave ->Then gave可能是楼主笔误
she will be better ->she would be better
wrote her feeling ->wrote down her feeling
She will miss us every time. ->She was missing us every time.
"一直在想念我们"
many knowledge->much knowledge(knowledge不可数)
usually would told her ->usually would tell her (would+动词原形)
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