小米手机尾插接触不良:英语短文改错

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Mary made a visit to China in last year.She took a lot of picture there. When she came back she decide to send away her films for printing one each time.In this way she would be more easy able to connect her photos with her diary ,which she had kept while she was there.With her disappointment, the first film that she sent the store were lost. She was very upset because she would never see his pictures in Beijing, though store said sorry to her again and again.
这篇短文有十处错误 帮帮忙找一下
应该是单词用错吧 应该跟过去式等 这类东西有关系

Mary made a visit to China in last year(去掉in )。She took a lot of picture there(picture末尾 加"s",因为是复数). When she came back she decide(过去式,decide末尾加"d") to send away (去掉away.因为send away 连在一起是一个固定短语搭配,译成“开除”)her films for printing(for printing改成to print.因为send一定要和to搭配才能译成送XX到XX地方) one each time.In this way she would be more easy able to connect her photos with her diary ,which she had(had去掉) kept while she was there.With(With改为To) her disappointment, the first film that she sent (中间加to)the store were(改成was) lost. She was very upset because she would never see his(改成her) pictures in Beijing, though store said sorry to her again and again.
这道题作过了,这是正确答案