合肥学院 对口:该英语作文呀

received
had + 动词的过去分词.表示完成时.

And I think it can improve my English if i write a letter in English.

So if I make some mistakes, please point out them.

substantiate是动词.
very后面加形容词,所以要把substantiate改成形容词形式.

Because I'll study some subjects in summer holiday
some 后面加复数,subjects
去掉the

In one month I'll visit the Singapore Thailand with my parents and my grandmother.
Singapore前面的the去掉.
去掉with.

I think I will have a great time.How about you.
要加句号.

If in , I think will have a lot of people get angry with train company.
这句有错,但我不知道你想要表达的意思,所有没改.

I hope you can come back home as quickly as you can.

And sometimes I also go (went)to take exercise.
I think that(去that) I can understand your letter .
You(were) talking about my summer holiday in the letter.
I think I could have a great(good因为great是非常好或者伟大的意思，不应用在这里) time .
应该差不多吧！

1,How's going on?

2,I had received...

3,I think (that x) I can understand your letter

4,writing the letter is a little diffcult for me.

5, I think writing letters in English can improve my English.

6,So if I have some mistake (mistakes).

7,please point out my mistake(mistakes).

8,substantiate vacation(substantial)

9,some subject (subjects)

10, the Singapore Thailand (国家不加the)

11， my parents and my grandmother（去掉后面的那个my）

12,

How's going on? I had received your letter yesterday and read it carefully. I think that I can understand what you wrote in your letter. Perhaps it is a bit difficult for me to write a letter in English. But I think it can improve my English. So, if I have some mistakes, please point out them. You mentioed my summer holiday in the letter. I think I will enjoy a rich vacation. Because I'll take some courses in this summer holiday. Besides, I will also put aside some times to take exercise. In the first month I'll visit Singapore and Thailand with my parents and grandmother. I think I will have a great time and how about you? I read your letter about the strike. I think it's very interesting. If it really happened , I think there must be a lot of people who were very angry with the train company. At last,I hope you can come back as quickly as you can .
We send our loves.

My dear sister:
How's (every) going?(中间不能加it) I have received you letter yesterday and read it.（用现在完成时体现这封信对现在的意义，并不是过去的，如果你已经回了的信可以用had） I think that I can understand your meaning .But writing (to write)the letter has a little diffculty(some difficult因为difficult是adj.).And I think that writing the letter in English will improve my English. (上面两句话同一错误，出现两个动词)So if I have some mistakes , please point them out . （point sth. out固定搭配，mistake当错误讲的时候是可数名词）You're talking about my summer holiday in the letter. I think I have a very substantial holiday（如果用holiday就上下全用，如果用vacation也是，上下问要一致）. Because I'll study some subjects in summer holiday （不用冠词）.And sometimes I also do exercise（固定）. After one month I'll visit the Singapore and Thailand (and并列一样的词，地名不可和人名并列) with my parents and grandmother. I think I would have a great time, how about you?(注意标点) I read you letter about the strike action. I think it's very interesting. If in , I think I will make a lot of people get angry with the train company. I hope you back home as soon as possible.
在信的后面不用那个，一般用yours ,**表示亲人的称呼

Dear sister: How's it going? （咱们这口语都这么讲。。。）I had( delete） receive(received) you letter yesterday and read it. I think that I can understand your letter .But write（writing) the letter have a little diffcult(difficulty) .And I think write(writing) the letter in English can improve my English. So
if I have some mistake(mistakes) that(delete), please point out my mistake(mistakes). You're talking(have just talked) about my summer holiday in the(your) letter. I think I have a very substantiate vacation(substantiated plan).(,) Because(because) I'll study some subject(subjects) in the summer holiday .(,)And(and) sometimes I (add:will)also go to take exercise(exercises). In one month I'll visit the Singapore(add:and) Thailand and(delete) with my parents and my grandmother. I think I could have a great time(.) how about you.(?) I read you letter about the strike action. I think it's very interesting. If in(that) , I think will have a lot of people get angry with train company. I hope you' as quickly as possible back to home.
We'resendourlove(??? we are sending our loves?)

(my sincerely)
(your name)