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My ruler was lost前应加but Xin Hua Xin Supermarket前加to how改为which(choose是及物动词) RMB 2顺序错了或直接写2 yuan 最后一句话完全错误

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Saturday July 15th
Great weather! It was cool. I went shopping.I wanted to buy a ruler. My ruler was lost.I went to Xin Hua Xin Supermarket,I saw many kinds of rulers.They are beautiful. They are in different colors. The yellow ruler is nice. But the red one is nice,too. I didn't konw how to choose. At last I bought the yellow one. It was cheap ,it was only RMB 2. I had fun to go shopping.

Saturday July 15th
Great weather! It was cool. I went shopping.I wanted to buy a ruler. My ruler was lost.I went Xinhuaxin Supermarket,I saw many kinds of rulers.They were beautiful. They were in different colors. The yellow ruler was nice. But the red one was nice,too. I didn't konw how to choose. At last I bought the yellow one. It was cheap ,it was only RMB 2. I had fun to go shopping.

a fine day that is (用is) cool. i went to the xin hua xin supermakret for buying a ruler, because mine was lost. there are a lot of colors displaying in the counter. both of yellow and red color are all nice. i had no diea how to chose one. at last i decided to buy the yellow one. it is 2 RMB but not cheap actually. i got a fun by shopping.

Saturday, July 15th
It was Great weather but cool. I went shopping to buy a ruler,because my ruler was lost.I went to Xin Hua Xin Supermarket.there were many kinds of rulers,both are beautiful. and They were in different colors. The yellow ruler was nice,and the red one was nice,too. I didn't konw which to choose. At last I bought the yellow one. it only costs 2 yuan. I had much fun today.