芜湖到扬州火车:请问这句话对吗?

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I have been working a hit-tech company as secretary, and have therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this fields.

其中的and have therefore attained 对吗?
还是要改成:
and therefor have e attained ?

应该是这样的:

I have been working for a high-tech company as a secretary (for a year), and have had a fair knowledge and experience in this fields.

我觉得要改一改
therefore 是个连词

therefore在这里没有错.

therefore 作为连词,其后应有分号