演员的诞生第四期:求英语口语高手

my name is HuoYan Wu,i'm a native.I graduated from JiangHan university .I'm interested in computer technology since my childhood, but i missed the chance to enter the department of computer science for my bad performance in the entrance test to senior high school. Therefore i have to study medicine. After graduation,i give up my job in hospital, and come to think bank following my interest.I think it's my best choice since i come into university .i always dreamed of owning an IT company. No matter how hard the road is ,i believe i would go on until the dream comes true.
well ,in my spare time ,i like playing basketball, playing computer games and chinese chess. also english is my favorate.i go to english corner to practise my oral english every Thursday ,and write compositions to improve my written ability .but i know my english is not good enough ,i will continue studying. ok, that is all,thank you for your attention.
将你的介绍做了一些小的修改，还有一些地方，我不太领会，所以未做改动。如果不合适的话请原谅。按照你的原文录了一段，不敢说念的很好，只希望能对你有所帮助~~

最好把这个介绍稍微改改先, 问题不少
比如..I like basketball意思是我喜欢篮球...仅仅是指球..
I like playing basketball才是我喜欢打篮球
since my childhood的表达似乎不妥.
medicine是药物...难道是学药理学的?...那也不对啊...
i often go to english corner to practise my oral english every Thursday ,用了often就不能用every thursday,
No matter how hard the road is...太中国化了...会理解成..不管路面有多硬..
but用的太突然..转折的很不舒服...
总之是问题多多..还需要多改进改进