杭州交通信息网2016年辅导员技能大赛:自己写的英语文章，帮忙改一下错啊
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Yesterday I came back to school. It is strange that nearly everybody are irritate, I don't know why, maybe it is so-called "blue Monday". Many friends told me to be happy, I also want to, but I always too hatred, I must change myself, not be anxious, not be irritated, and be happy.
My another friend was also in a bad mood, maybe I made her unhappy on Sunday. I want to say I do not want this situation, but, I am so sorry! I wish you can have another day!
Time is up, I have to go to the classroom, so just an end.
My another friend was also in a bad mood, maybe I made her unhappy on Sunday. I want to say I do not want this situation, but, I am so sorry! I wish you can have another day!
Time is up, I have to go to the classroom, so just an end.
It is strange that nearly everybody are irritate, I don't know why, maybe it is so-called "blue Monday".
中的 is改为was are改为were don't改为didn't is改为was
not be anxious, not be irritated,
中的not be 改为 don't be
My another friend 应为Another friends
I have to go to the classroom 去掉the
so just an end 中an 改为the
你的标点符号用法很不规范，希望改正
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