杭州交通信息网达坂城的姑娘克里木:有错误吗
来源：百度文库 编辑：杭州交通信息网 时间：2024/04/30 04:29:35
I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of quality engineering manager which you recently advertised in the local newspaper.有错误吗
I am writing you this letter to show ...
不好，改为：
I'm writing to you to show ...
post更本不用换，很标准的词啊。
后面我觉得这样改一下好些：
I'm writing to you to show my keen interest in the post of quality engineering manager which was offered in your recently advertisement in the local newspaper.
个人弊见而已！
很好啊
最好把post改成vacancy，职位。
最好用position 职位一词。
前面应该是：I am writing to you.....
PS：职位用post完全可以，不用修改。
I am writing to apply for the quality engineering manager for which you advertised in the local newspaper recently .