牙齿全面做需要多少钱:请英语高人帮我修改和完善下我的EMAIL

Hello Abdu,

It's been a long time since we last saw each other. Hope all is going well with you.
I am doing well. I have passed all of the exams. The last two exams were very easy so I can enjoy the World Cup in China. By the way, congratulations to you on your team winning the league! But I think Juve just got lucky, you know, should he be degraded with AC Milan for calling judgement, my team will become the champion!
After you left, we had no one to teach us English. So my English sunk... He... (That's not my problem). I have done more exercises playing Winning Eleven, so I am better at it than before. Yet, I have no chance of winning you, :( bad luck for me!
Oh, here's a big surprise for you, Qing Ling and Ma Qian become a couple. Qin Ling is very romatic, he is showing his love and affection in a good way.

I should get back with my exercise now. Wishing you all the luck!

Talk to you later.

Robert
MAy 25th, 2006.

05-25-06
Dear Abu,
Hello! Long time no see. How is everything? Are you ok? I bet you are .

I am fine. I passed all my exams. The last two exams were very easy, so right now I could enjoy the word cup (in Germany?) in China. Oh, by the way, congratulations to you on your favorite team winning the league champion. I think Juve was very lucky. As you know that it should be degraded with AC MILAN offending against judges, otherwise my team would have become the champion.^_^
Ever since you left, nobody teaches us English any more. I feel down, down, down down. Hehe,( but that is not my fault). I have done more exercises now, playing Winning Eleven. I am much stronger than before, but too bad, there is no way for me to challenge you. What a luck!
Oh, here is a big surprise for you: Qin Ling and Ma qian have tied the knot. Qin Ling was so romantic when she exchanged vows with Ma Qian.
Time to do exercises,^_^，now.
Wish you lots of luck!
Talk to you next time.
Love,
Robert

第一句：long time no see才对
第三行：because i have passed all the exams and the two later ones are very easy for me, i can enjoy the world cup in……
第四行：congratulations to you/ favourite /won the championship
第五行：lucky because you know……/ for bribing the referee, thus my team will becomethe champion
第二段：after you went away /teach /so i have falled behind others /
many excercises because of /better than what i used to be/ but there is no chance
第三段：oh i have a big surprise for you /has been a couple/ show his love/ romanticly/ the best way to know it is to ask qin ling

你的英文实在不咋样，下次认真点吧，p.s. 我也希望国米拿冠军

Dear Abu,
Long time no see!
How are you?
I am fine,because I passed all exams,and the last two exams are very easy,so I can enjoy the word cup in China.By the way,congratulations to you that your faverite team won the league.but I think Juve is very lucky because you know it should be degraded with AC MILAN for calling judgment,then my team became to the champion.^_^
After you go, nobody teaches us English,so I descend,^_^(that is not my problem), I have done many exercise for playing Winning eleven,so I am better now,but no chance for me to chanllenge you...
Oh, give you a big surprise,Qin Ling and Ma Qian has to be a couple,Qin Ling showed his love to Ma Qian very romantic,oh,the good way for knowing that is to ask Qin Ling.
I should do my exercise,^_^，I wish you good luck,see you.

Robert
25.5.2006
稍微改了一下，该多了就不是你的文章了^_^

Abu:hello
It's been a long time no see,how r u doing now? i gusee not bad.

I am fine,for i have passed all eaxms,and the last two exams are very easy.So i can enjoy the world cup during it is in china.oh,by the way,congratulations to you that your favourrite team won the league.but i think juve is very lucky, you know it should be degraded with AC MILAN for calling judgment,then my team became the champion.^_^
after your leave, nobody teaches us English,so i have difficulty to improve my english,hehe(although that is not my problem), i have done my exercise by playing Winning eleven,so i am better than i used to be,but here is no chance for me to chanllenge you,bad luck for me.
oh,a big surprise,qin ling and ma qian has been a couple,qin ling looks like very romantic lover,oh,the best way to know the detail is to ask qin ling.
i should do exercise now,^_^，i wish you good luck,see you.

Best wishes

Robert
25.5.2006

Dear Abu:

It's long time no see, How was everthing going on? I guess not bad, eha?

I am quite fine as I just passed all my eaxms, you know what? the last 2 exmas were so easy to me. That I have enough time to watch World Cup 2006 in my home. Oh, BTW, Congratulations to you as your faverirate team had won the finnal games. I suppose you are very excited to know the result that AC Milan team.

I found my English can not be improve quite fast as you left me alone, aha, I believe I will do my best to do more exercises. It's Okay now but cannot compare with you, I still need time.

There comes a new surprise, Qin Ling and Ma Qian married. Qin proposal to her girl very romantic, and you can imagin how romantic it is in their welding. You would better to write to him as well.

Well, I need stop as I should do more exercise,^_^. Will talk to you later.

Bye for now.

Best Regards,

Robert
2006.5.25