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I have corrected the paragraph:
In the past few years, our country's economy grew rapidly, the rag trade also developed fairly rapidly. The export for clothes is ranked the first place in the world. But compared to developed countries, our clothing quality is still stays in a low stage, until today, there’s even not a famous garment brand of real high class. Are we just doing as base for other foreign garment’s brand? Right now, globalization is on its way, in order to seek bigger development, the foreign corporations invading china in order to get more recourses and markets. How should we deal with these challenges? It's a challenge that every industry including rag trade, has to face.

大体上写得可以,中国式英语多点,多点看英语原著就可以提高:
In the past few years, the economy of our country has grown rapidly, and the fashion industry also has developed faily quickly. The output and export of cloth both ranked No. 1 in the world. But to compare with the developed coutries, but the quality of our fashion design still falls behind those of other countries'.Even until now, we still have no fashion dresses which are classified as high quality. Are we just going to let other countries' designs take over our nation? Right now, globalisation is taking place, the foreign super companies are seeking bigger development , they are coming to china in order to get more recourses and markets. How should we face this challenge? It's a challenge that every industry has to face.