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呵呵,我说有一句怎么这么眼熟啊……我把整篇给你都翻译出来了.仅供参考:)

面对全球市场的一体化趋势和激烈竞争，中国企业纷纷寻找最适合现实发展的经营途径。
Against the background of international economic integration, Chinese businesses are trying various means to optimize their mode of business operation.
本文指出了企业若想在激烈的全球竞争中生存下来，必须集中核心竞争力，采取灵活敏捷的生产方式，对多变的市场作出快速反映。而要达到这一目的，企业首先要变革传统的企业经营模式，采取先进的经营管理模式，而虚拟经营是先进模式之一。（这句很罗嗦，可以简化）
In this article, the author points out that Chinese businesses, in order to survive global competition, must enhance core competitiveness and adopt flexible production systems, reacting quickly to the changing market.The concept of Virtual Management is therefore introduced.
本文以美特斯邦威为例，分析得知虚拟经营作为一种新型经营模式，能够让企业将发展的原动力——品牌经营与产品设计分离出来，占据企业发展的核心地位，赋予品牌塑造和产品设计新的生命力，形成企业竞争优势，提高核心竞争力。
The author takes the example of Meters/Bonwe to demonstrate that in the Virtual Management strategy, brand management and R&D, main sources of development are highlighted and invigorated to promote the core competitiveness of a business.
文章阐述了选择虚拟经营的原因、虚拟经营的内容和虚拟经营的模式，接着分析了企业从事虚拟经营的优势、存在的问题与对策。
The reason for adopting the Vitual Management strategy, its contents and ways to implement it are elaborated. And then its advantages, as well as associated problems and countermeasures are discussed.
综合分析得出，虽然虚拟经营模式存在缺陷，但企业只要能够创造从事虚拟经营所必需的条件，形成对策克服问题，那么，从事虚拟经营就是中国企业可选择的一种经营模式。
It is concluded that despite several shortcomings the Virtual Management strategy is an option for Chinese businesses as long as the prerequisites are met and potential problems are anticipated.

综合分析得出，虽然虚拟经营模式存在需要企业创造条件的缺陷，但虚拟经营的确是一条适合中国企业的经营模式．
which want the enterprise can create condition.最后一句的WHICH应该是修饰前面的BLEMISH的

我的翻译是否满意
综合分析得出，虽然虚拟经营模式存在缺陷，但企业只要能够创造从事虚拟经营所必需的条件，形成对策克服问题，那么，从事虚拟经营就是中国企业可选择的一种经营模式。

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问题很多,第一个单词就有问题.时间关系暂时不能详读,看半夜有空没有

The integral whole that faces the global market turns the trend and fierce competitions, the Chinese business enterprise looks for in succession the most suitable match the management path of the realistic development.This text pointed out the business enterprise if want to exist down in the world of the vehemence compete, must concentrate the core competencies, adopt vivid nimble of mode of production, make a fast reflection towards the market that change much.But to attain this purpose, the business enterprise wants to change the business enterprise business model of the tradition first, adopt the forerunner's management management mode, but the virtual management is one of the advanced modes.This text is to take beautiful especially the 斯 nation 威 as an example, analyzing to know the conjecture management to be a kind of new business model, can let the motive force- brand management and products that the business enterprise will develops design separate out, occupy the core position of the business enterprise development, give the brand to mold to design the new vitality with product, formation the business enterprise competitive advantage, exaltation core competencies.The article elaborated to choose the contents of the reason, virtual management and the mode of the virtual managements of virtual management, analyzing the business enterprise to be engaged in advantage, existent problem and counterplans of virtual management immediately after.Comprehensive analysis, although the virtual business model existence blemish, business enterprise as long as can create to be engaged in the conjecture management the essential condition, become the counterplan to overcome the problem, so, be engaged in the virtual management is a kind of business model that the Chinese business enterprise eligibility choose.