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Wuxi——the City of vim
Wuxi is a beautiful city next to Tai Lake. There are many places of interest. It’s a city of vim.
The economy in Wuxi is developing fast. Wuxi is also called ‘Small Shanghai’. It means Wuxi is nearly as rich as Shanghai.
The traffic in Wuxi is really convenient. Many people visit Wuxi every year. They all enjoyed themselves.
Environments of Wuxi are very elegant. You can visit many parks and squares there. You can enjoy the beauty of flowers, trees, lakes, and the blue sky. Some parks even can take you to gorgeous places like fairylands. You must be very jovial when you travel in Wuxi.
Wuxi is also a great choice if you want to go shopping. It is a real shopping heaven. There are many big shopping malls in Wuxi are cheap and wonderful. You can buy anything you want there.
Wuxi is a beautiful city next to Tai Lake. There are many places of interest. It’s a city of vim.
The economy in Wuxi is developing fast. Wuxi is also called ‘Small Shanghai’. It means Wuxi is nearly as rich as Shanghai.
The traffic in Wuxi is really convenient. Many people visit Wuxi every year. They all enjoyed themselves.
Environments of Wuxi are very elegant. You can visit many parks and squares there. You can enjoy the beauty of flowers, trees, lakes, and the blue sky. Some parks even can take you to gorgeous places like fairylands. You must be very jovial when you travel in Wuxi.
Wuxi is also a great choice if you want to go shopping. It is a real shopping heaven. There are many big shopping malls in Wuxi are cheap and wonderful. You can buy anything you want there.
最后一句不大好，应该改为：There are many big shopping malls in Wuxi and the goods are all cheap and wonderful there.句子结构不大正确，且也不能说商场是很便宜的，应该是里面的商品便宜．你感觉呢？
结尾可以为：As a citizen of the beautiful city ,I am very proud of it .And have you been here before ?If not,you are wellcom to come here ,I will show you all the wonderful places of the morden city.