servicemanager:there are 9 persons claiming they believe in god in every ten persons.

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there be的复合句的问题,这句有语法毛病吗》/

基本没有问题,建议将"god"后面的"in"改为"out of",同时"claiming"用的不对,个人意见如下:
There are 9 persons who claim they believe in god out of every ten.

9 PEOPLE
而且句子顺序不对导致意思产生歧义。
最好改为

THERE ARE 9 PEOPLE OUT OF TEN CLAIM (THAT) THEY XXXXXXX..

有问题
一个句子不能同时存在2谓语