科技部孙晓明简历:语法高手请进!

即便是英语高手也会偶尔写错句子，主要看细心与否了。
My English needs to be improve. I am graduat frome *** university
应改正为：
My English needs to be improved/needs improving. I graduated from *** university.
后面一句改为： I am a graduate from *** university.也未尝不可：我是***大学的毕业生。

对的，be + 动词 是被动态，所以应该用过去分词。my english needs to be improved.

第二句话也不对。这里的 graduate 可以当动词，也可以当名词。
i graduated from **** university 是 我从 *** 学校毕业的意思，
而 i am a graduate from *** university 则是 我是***学校的毕业生。

1.My English needs to be improved.(be+过去分词表示被动态,我的英语需要被改进,因为英语不会自己去进步,是人在进步.) 或My English needs improving.

2.I graduated from *** university.

... needs to be improved/needs improving. eg.My room needs to be cleaned=My room needs cleaning.

I graduated(动词过去式) from *** university. /I am a graduate(名词,毕业生)from *** university

improved
i graduated from

不成立```因为BE动词后面加动词原形或ING形式`可以再两个句子间用AND连接``