有多少同性能改变过来:谁帮我写个研究生面试自我介绍我把分全给他/她！

这是我帮同学写过的一个研究生面试自我介绍，是学医的，希望对你能有一些参考价值。

My name is --. I was born and brought up in --. I went to -- city in 19-- to study in the medical college of -- university for 5 years.
I majored in Clinical Medical Science. I was interested in it and have been working hard on it since I attended college. I was granted the scholarships each semester and graduated with a Bachelor's degree in 2004. In a word, in my college life not only could I learn a great deal of specialized knowledge, but also could I learn to cooperate with others and deal with problems on my own.
After my graduation, I went to work at -- Heart Disease Hospital as a heart physician. During the year I worked there, I’m very proud to say that the practice enhanced my understandings of the medical theory and kinds of heart diseases, and my operation skills was reinforced meantime. But also, I found that the college experience was far less enouph to cope with some kind of exceptional diseases, such as ... Therefore, I attended this examination and wanna keep on pursuing my medical study. I believe that my diligence will live up to your school motto——...
(Since I'm busy during weekdays,I like reading in my spare time.I always find the latest books in the field to read in order to keep abreast of the development in the dorman. Besides, I still read some books for fun, such as books on housekeeping, life and health, and fashion,etc. These books make me broad-minded and tasteful. )
That's it, I think.

楼上的，连贯性比较差