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Olympic and me
How does Olympic game come from ?Let me tell you.
At ancient Greece , there were a great amount of wars mount all of the cities.It brought people a lot of disaster.For peace,the kings of all the cities discussed and had made a dicision. They decide to held a sports game at the city call Olympic.Greece sports game last for a long time . The modern Olympic game began form 1896.Up till now ,the Olympic game has already held 28.
The symbolize of Olympic is make from five wreaths.It could be unicolor or it can be five kinds of colour, blue, yellow, black, green and red.The circle wreath of 5 different colors are explained the symbolizes of five greatest continents.
The 29 Olympic game is going to hold in Beijing ,China.This an exciting news for anybody in china. The slogan of Olympic in 2008 is ‘one world ,one dream’,this four words give us infinite power.I’m a member of china ,I will use the most sincere voice, saying loudly:
" Bless you, belong to beijing, belong to China, belong to our 2008!"
Olympic game is a meeting of peace and friendship. Olympic game is like a window ,and I am like a watcher.The view outside the window is interested me .I like Olympic game because it make my life more colourful. When I hear that Beijing is going to hold the 29 Olympic game ,I was so excited that I cheered and I could say nothing .