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My Favourite Sport
I like sports very much.I like running,skating,playing basketball,swimming and so on.But swimming is my favorite. When I was a little boy,my father and mother took me to a swimming pool.They taught me how to swim there.They put me into the pool, but I was really afraid of that.I cried out loud and yelled,"No!No!"They both laughed and said ,"oh don`t worry ,dear!It`s not difficult.We will help you,OK?"Then we began to try, once, twice...Oh,I could swim myself in the pool! How exciting I was! After that,I wasn`t afraid of water any more and became very interested in swimming.swimming is a really good hobby.If you swim in the water,you make yourself look like a lovely fish!It is so cool!I`m sure you will feel very happy!And the most important thing is:If you swim often,you`ll be strong!
By the way,there is a story about me in my school.Everyone knew that I love swimming very much. One day,when I was asleep ,one of my classmates woke me up,and he said:"Get up!
Get up!Let`s go swimming.I have two tickets for swimming.When I heard that,I quickly jumped out of bed and went with him.But a few minutes later ,I came back with my classmates.In fact,there were no tickets for swimming.
Dear friends,swimming is really good for us and it`s really interesting.Let`s enjoy swimming.

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When I was a little boy
took me to a swimming pool