杭州交通信息网2t硬盘能录多少天:帮我修改一下英语作文，有问题语病的地方请指出来，谢谢。
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I was really sad there days. I have problems and they are serious. I need your help.
My best friend leaved for Shanghai two days ago. I always missed her. I want to call her up bur I did not her telephone number. So I can not liaison with her. What should I do?
Then we talk about another problem. In my birthday. My father buys an expensive Swiss watch for me. But I do not know that where my watch is. I look for everywhere. I lost my watch. I was really sad. I can not visualize if my father know it. It was terrible! Oh, what should I do? Can you help me?
一个有关于自己的问题的作文，初二，哪里有语病或者不恰当的地方请给予修改，谢谢。
第三行第一个单词不是 BUR 是 BUT , 后面是 did not konw.
My best friend leaved for Shanghai two days ago. I always missed her. I want to call her up bur I did not her telephone number. So I can not liaison with her. What should I do?
Then we talk about another problem. In my birthday. My father buys an expensive Swiss watch for me. But I do not know that where my watch is. I look for everywhere. I lost my watch. I was really sad. I can not visualize if my father know it. It was terrible! Oh, what should I do? Can you help me?
一个有关于自己的问题的作文，初二，哪里有语病或者不恰当的地方请给予修改，谢谢。
第三行第一个单词不是 BUR 是 BUT , 后面是 did not konw.
第三行not后面少了know;第四行we talk 最好说成Let us;倒数第三行I do not know 后面不用加that;look for 后面缺少it； I can not visualize if my father know it．中将visualize改成imagine.你的作文总的来说，让人读起来不是特别的舒服，语句说的也不是很地道．我的修改也不是特别好，希望给你些许意见，希望我们都会有所进步！！！