定制 翻译:一篇小短文,翻译一下

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今天,天气很好,天上飘着白云。我去商店里买东西。忽然,我发现一个小男孩在角落里哭。我走过去问:“你为什么哭?”小男孩说:“我和妈妈走散了。”
后来,我帮小男孩找到了妈妈。他的妈妈很感谢我。我做了好事,我十分高兴。

救这篇短文,很简单的,求大家译成英文,多加几句也没关系

It's a nice day today.
The clouds are floating in the sky.
I went to the shop to buy something.
Suddenly, i found a boy crying in the corner.
I asked him "why are you crying ?"
He said that he was stary.
Then i helped him find his mother.
His mother thanked me much.
I did a good thing ,so I was very happy.

要用过去时,1楼那位很多语法错误。
help sb do/doing 不能加to
还有一个句子中不能有2个谓语等等……错误太多了

lose one's way 是迷路的意思,而不是和他妈妈走失,且,way不可以加s

Today, the weather very is good, the space is fluttering the white clouds. I go to in the store to go shopping. Suddenly, I discovered a young boy cries in the quoin. I walk asked that, "Why do you cry?" The young boy said that, "I and mother dispersed."
Afterwards, I helped the young boy to find mother. His mother thanks me very much. I did good, I am extremely happy.

Today, the weather very is good, the space is fluttering the white clouds. I go to in the store to go shopping. Suddenly, I discovered a young boy cries in the quoin. I walk asked that, "Why do you cry?" The young boy said that, "I and mother dispersed." Afterwards, I helped the young boy to find mother. His mother thanks me very much. I did good, I am extremely happy.

It is fine today,there wasn't a cloud in the sky.I went to a shop .Suddenly I found a little boy crying in the corner.I went to ask:“Why are you cry?” The little boy replied:“I lost my ways.”Later,I helped him find his mom.His mom thanked me very much.I am very glad to do the right thing.