aida64安卓版1.47:我想给哈利波特的扮演者DAN写信

他能收到吗?????????????

Dear Dan,
I'm so excited writing you this letter.
I'm a Chinese boy/girl, one of your most faithful fans. Your excellent movie skills snatch my whole heart, you will never know how I admire you. I went to the cinema and enjoyed the series of Harry Potter, they're really wonderful. You make the boy stand lively in front of me. If it were not for you, I wouldn't get so interested in the books. Both the movies and the books lead me into a magical world. I become the most beatific person in the world after watching your movies (no matter which one).
I hope the movie Harry Potter 5 will come out soon. How I wish to see you again on the screen!

I'm sorry that my English is not so well, and there may be some mistakes in this letter. Anyway, it doesn't matter.I just want you to know that you're the best in my mind!
Wish you every happiness!

yours
佳代子

如果真能收到,代siriusblack向Dan问好~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~呵呵

Dear Dan
I'm really very happy to write to you!
I'm your fans ，I like all of your movies.(说说你如何喜欢他的电影) I think you are an excellent actor.
I think you are very great! (说说你如何喜欢丹，他演技很高等等)
I hope your new movie will be quick to come out! (说说如何盼望哈5)
I am sorry that my English is not well but I think DAN is the best! At last I wish you can enjoy every day!

Yours,

Dear Dan
I'm really happy to write the letter to you!
I'm your fan,i like watching all of your movies especially Harry Potter!!It's fantastic!!You are really good at acting,you are brilliant.
I hope your new movie "Harry Potter5"can come out soon and i'm really looking foward to see it!! At last i wish you can enjoy your study and happy everyday!!!

写信要自己写才真切，不管你的英语水平怎么样。别人写得还能表达你的意思么？
另外指出一个错误，you should say"I'm your fan" ,not"fans".虽然现在很多中国人都爱说“粉丝粉丝”的，但学英语还是要弄清单复数。
祝你成功！
P.S.我也是Daniel的影迷呢！你怎么写信给他呢？是寄信还是电子邮件？可以告诉我吗？