杭州交通信息网配电房和变电站的区别:我写了一片英语短文，不知识否有错，谢谢指出！！
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A young man in Teheran bought a new bed for the first time in his life.He slept on the roof of his house because the weather was hot.But the bed was swept off the roof during a storm three nights later.The man was not only unhurt but still on his matters.the bed was in pieces.As he carried the matters indoors and went to back to sleep.
A young man in Teheran bought a new bed for the first time in his life.He slept on the roof of his house as it was hot.But the bed was swept off the roof during a storm three nights later.The man was not only unhurt but also still on his matters.the bed was in pieces,but he carried the matters indoors and went back to sleep.
because 改为as 没有提问的因为，一般都用as
the weather 改为it ,表天气的都是形式主语it
not only --but also 是固定短语
as 改为but
went to back 改为went back ，因为back 是副词，前面不用介词
1。but不可以放句首。
2。最后一句话为什么要用As引导？什么意思呀？
3。最后一句话应该是went back to sleep.
When?Where?Why And How
but不可以放句首。??????????
可以 傻蛋
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