重庆个税抵扣房贷攻略:各位大哥大姐帮忙查个错,谢谢

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Big Ting
I think the next “Big Thig ”will be a new kinds of transportain
vehicle.Because now,our transportain vehicle is too slow.If we want to travel to a far place,it will take us a lot of time.And accidents often happen.But this new invenion will take us to a far place in a few seconds.It is safer and more confortable.(谢谢了,小弟水平有限请不要嘲笑)

Big Ting
I think the next “Big Thig ”will be a new kinds of transportain vehicle.
transportation,你的拼错了。
kinds 改为kind
Because now,our transportain vehicle is too slow.If we want to travel to a far place,it will take us a lot of time.And accidents often happen.
now似乎改为nowdays比较好
vehicle改为复数,谓语也用复数
a far place改为 a farther place

最后一句happen后面再加个 on this way

But this new invenion will take us to a far place in a few seconds.It is safer and more confortable
应改为comfortable
far的改法同前

写的还是不错的

Big thing
I think the next “Big Thing ”will be a new kind of transport
vehicle. Because at the moment,our transport vehicle is too slow.If we want to travel to a far place,it will take us a lot of time.And accidents often happen. But this new invention will take us to a far place in a few seconds.It is safer and more confortable.

transportation

Big Thing
I think the next “Big Thing ”will be a new kind of transportation vehicle. Because now, our transportain vehicles are so slow. When we want to travel to a far place, it takes us a lot of time. Besides accidents take place very often. This new invenion will cover a long distance in just a few seconds. It is safer and more confortable

题目看不懂。
第一行 kinds改为kind
其余实在太乱了。。(汗)
最后一行
confortable改为comfortable

kinds____kind
invenion____invention