会声会影x8教程全套:请问这道英语题我的回答在语法和用法上有问题吗?

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Do you like travelling ? Tel your reasons.
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My answer is:
Yes , I like travelling very much . There are two reasons : first of all , I'll be very happy if I get away for a short time . The second , I can leran more knowledges from others in the travel .

I can leran more knowledges from others in the travel .
knowledge是不可数名词,不能加s
最后一句最好改为
I can learn a lot during travellling 。

Yes , I like travelling very much 。 First of all , I'll be very happy if I visit different places for a short time . secondly , I can learn a lot during travellling .

Yes , I like travelling very much . There are two reasons : Firstly, I'll be very happy to be out for a short time(get away是逃脱) . Secondly , I can leran a lot from others(learn不与knowledge连用.) through the travelling .

Yes , I like travelling very much . There are two reasons. First of all , I would be very happy if I could get away for a short time. Secondly, I can leran more knowledges from others during travelling.