九叶网:请大家帮我找出有错误的词句，并改正，谢谢你！！

Dear friends:

I am a new member,The clerk at Shanghai Foreign Trade Company.I like studying English, but my English very poor,I do not know what to do with myself,so I am very worried.I like and very happy know this web site.This is the article I write first time to here ---My family.

There are five people in my family,my father,my mother,my sister,my brother and I.My father is a rather hard man.He is an accountant and he usually works from 9 o‘clock in the morning to 6 o‘clock in the evening.My mother is a great and good man.She works at the restaurant in the centre of town in the daytime,and works housework in the evening.My younger sister is a lovely high school student.She‘s want‘s to become a teacher.My younger brother is a middle school student.But he is even taller than me.He likes playing computer games in his free time.They lives in Fuzhou.I‘m a past time student of Shanghai TV University.The clerk at Shanghai Foreign Trade Company.My family is a happy one.We all love it.

I think the English sentences have many mistakes.Please correct it, Thank you for your trouble.

Happy National Day to your from me.