杭州交通信息网急性白血病髓系m4:作业帮忙
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一篇短文改错,各位帮忙
Today I visited the Smiths-my first time visit 1.____
to a American family.They live in a small 2.____
town.It was very kind for them to meet me 3.____
at the railway station and drove me to their home. 4.____
The Smiths did his best to make me feel 5.____
at home.They offered me coffee and other 6.____
drinks.We have a good time talking and laughing 7.____
together.They eager to know everything about 8.____
China and asked me lots of question.In fact, 9.____
They are planning to visit China in next year. 10.____
Today I visited the Smiths-my first time visit 1.____
to a American family.They live in a small 2.____
town.It was very kind for them to meet me 3.____
at the railway station and drove me to their home. 4.____
The Smiths did his best to make me feel 5.____
at home.They offered me coffee and other 6.____
drinks.We have a good time talking and laughing 7.____
together.They eager to know everything about 8.____
China and asked me lots of question.In fact, 9.____
They are planning to visit China in next year. 10.____
1 time纯粹是多余的，应该删除
2.American的A是元音字母，故应该用an
3.be kind of是固定搭配，故把for改为of
4根据上句"to meet me...and drove me to their home.来看，and的后面也应该加to，但是如果这样，to后面应该跟动词原形
所以只好把它当作不定事to省略，故drove应该改为drive
5.The Smiths史密什一家，故应该是their
6。没有错误
7.整篇文章都是以一般过去时为主，故have应该改为had
8.They后面缺少助动词，故应该在They后面加Were
9.Lots of许多，故question应用复数，故应改为questions
10.in多余，应该去掉。
1.visit前加"to"
2.live改lived
3.for改of
4.drove改drive
5.his改their
6.√
7.have该had
8.eager前加were
9.question改questions
10.去掉"in"