杭州交通信息网挤出epdm橡胶:英语英语
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YOU write very good.I like english ,but i can't teach.becaus i havn't more time.If i write wrong ,speak to me please. 寻找错误，有多处哦，急用
write good改成write well，因为write是动词，well是副词，副词修饰动词
i havent more改成don't have much time，have在这里是作动词用，所以用助动词来修饰它的状态，然后time是个不可数名词，再加上句子里没有比较的东西出现，用much来修饰time
其他就没什么严格上语法的问题，只不过不太好而已，建议改为
if there's something wrong with my writing，please help me correct
You write very well.I like English,but I can't teach.Because I don't have more time.If I write wrong（或者If I make a mistake in writing ），tell me please.（speak to me please也可以，但不是很好）
You write very well. I like English, but I can't learn, because I haven't extra time. If I write improperly, please point out.