电子体温计腋下加0.5:高手~~翻译一下

wait for sb to do sth,对吗？

期待你将我从死神那救回来。

我等你来拯救我

这句话从语法上说是不合理的，wait for sb.后面不能接动词原形？除非是句歌词。

意思大概是：我在着期待你将我从死神那救回来。

楼主,这句话有两层含义
一是说,灵魂的死亡,人的魂魄已经不存在了，是诗人的一种寄托,希望对方将自己从死亡中拯救过来，实际是不可能的,只是一种对人间美好生活的向往,

另一种是说,精神的死亡,名存实亡了，需要一种新的力量将自己的精神世界赋予新的力量,这是能实现的,

翻译诗歌重意境的翻译，要透过表面看到事物的本质,个人看法,多切磋!

●额外奉献

True Love Feeling

— Written by Renjunrich

Love is a game which belongs to the person who is brave.
爱情是勇敢者的游戏
Do not be afraid of being hurt feeling,
不能怕被伤害，
having to accept the ache.
也不能怕痛
Just like joining the "Cup World of Love",
就象参加爱情的世界杯一样。
entering the finals ,
进入决赛的
there is no failture,
不存在失败者
Only having one champion,
冠军只有一个
the runner-up have to face to music,
亚军必须面对失败
to understand what is a loser in the front of the Judge of Love.
在爱情的考官面前去理解什么是失败
He has learned how to take care of the Love carefully,
他已经学会如何珍惜爱情，
that's harvest which he got it.
那就是他的收获了
no matter who she choose him as her boyfriend,
无论她选择谁做她的男朋友
I knew that I was a good man.
我必须知道我是个好男人
Not being a wonderful,
不是我不优秀
Only her own choice.
仅仅是她的个人选择
I have a couragement to face it,
我有勇气面对一切
Having to chase her,
但我必须要全力追赶
Until i am ......
直到最后！

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BEST WISHES TO BEST "FRIEND"

Counting the days
when we have been getting to know each other,
it's about more than one month,
Everything what happened us is coincidence!
In every chat,i always calls her " Little Jade."
it's a kind,friendly way to ask her name.
I like it.
Sometimes,
i think,
how can i get my real love feeling,
In fact,
if you are hurry to get it,
the feeling which you want to get it,
not belongs to you.
Hold your horses,
Then that's ok!
Every year,
the special day when it is on 14, February,
Red roses, choccolate,
is full of love feeling.
Though we are still common friends.
it does not matter.
Remember this：
I always you are real best friend,
giving your encouragement
which you want to get.
having my strong support for your study。
Believe me,
Best wishes to best friend,
sending it to the distant Europe,
acrossing the space to get you heart,
warming your feeling !

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Sometimes，
after passing a period of time，
I calm down gradually，
I found that my first love feeling
is a very romantic.
Like charging a battery，
when I was in love with her，
I have been trapped love by her，
I was attracted by her words,
which she said to me，
Maybe it is a dream,
which I hope I never wake up again.
I hope I always was in love for ages，
I hope...
Like power cut，
it was a blow to my hopes.
Suddenly I was lost love feeling
I am not for sure where I am，
what I can do ，
Why I should do it，
how I should do it......
Like real pals said，
tomorrow will be fine.
I will get a better battery ，
a place for charging
my love story，
keeping my love story which is a happy ending.
I hope....

●这三首英文诗歌，是我最喜欢的代表作，
按前后顺序，可以说，
第一首最能表达内心的狂躁的氛围，
第二首，词语用语的较为华丽，
第三首，运用了暗喻，表达了内心的变化！

说到如何写好英文诗歌，
首先呢，
要有热爱生活的激情，
对生命，
生活，友谊，
爱情，事业，
有感情，
作品是来源于生活的，

其次要有自己对生活的独特的看法，
把对生活的情感用文字表达出来，
用你的睿智，你的幽默，你的一切手段，去诠释
激情的诗篇，
这是我的看法！

最后呢，语言上简练，明快，大众话的词语最好，
少用复杂的难词，但句子结构可以复杂些！
采用些叠级句子！

希望大家多多练习，互相切磋！