巴川中学云课堂:帮忙看下有没有语法错误

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National Day
Today is National Day, the birthday of China. People are all happy everywhere in China.
This week, my father is in Chengdu, my mother is working. So I have to play alone at home. In my house, I only can play computer or watch TV, although I have some toys. Because I think toys is for children.
Turn on the TV, you can see everyone is busy to celebrate with dancing and singing.
What a boring National Day it is!

It's National Day today,the birthday of China.People are happy all over China.This week, my father is in Chengdu,while my mother is working outside,so I have to play alone at home.At home,I can only play computer and watch TV, although I have some toys. But I think toys are for children.
Turn on the TV,and you can see every one busy celebrating by dancing and singing.
What a boring National Day it is!

This week, my father is in Chengdu, and my mother is working.

In my house, I can only play the computer or watch TV,

Turn on the TV, and you can see everyone is busy celebrating by dancing and singing

1.This week, my father is in Chengdu, and my mother is working
2.In my house, I can only play the computer or watch TV
3.Because I think toys are for children

Because I think toys is for children
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